A marmoset viewer file of the anaotmy for those interested, thought it was an interesting way to share a zbrush anatomy sculpt.
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/eP4WY
A marmoset viewer file of the anaotmy for those interested, thought it was an interesting way to share a zbrush anatomy sculpt.
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/eP4WY
The nipples seems too high, or the crease under the boobs are too low (or a little of both) making it look like fake boobs, so if it’s the desired effect, I would say well done, if not, maybe you could look into it (tough task sculptors do sometimes…)
It seems you used the classic 2 head for the nipple line, which is usually fine for 8 heads proportions, and sometimes 7.5 heads, but your model is more 7 head tall right?
I think that’s a great way to show the anatomy for criticism, since we can take a screenshot from any angle and overpaint for you to learn from.
I’m not so great at drawing so I’ll just point out few things here, as I looked at the Marmoset file:
clavicles don’t have that slightly elongated s-shape
I can’t remember seeing any references of protruding cervical vertebrae as a whole, instead of just C7 (and sometimes with T1) and “side bars” of trapezius around them to the back of the skull. Doesn’t look bad at the moment, but it’s confusing
The styloid process of radius (the head of radius) is bulging just a tad too much, compared to the head of ulna which is usually the most commonly visible bony protrusion around that area
There’s a little bit too much mass on the palm side of the hand, from the pinky side to the thumb
Othen than that, I like the natural posture, fitness and proportions. Keep at it.
I also have to mention that your old skin painting tutorial really opened my eyes and changed my approach to skin texturing. Thank you a lot for that, ysalex. If you ever want to check out my ArtStation quickly (not much to see right now, though), there’s currently one textured WIP model (needs only hair) with a skin texture based on your tips and tricks. (; https://www.artstation.com/artist/fourtynights
Great criticism FourtyNights! Let’s apply that to this image too, and make something great!
http://www.zbrushcentral.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=442373&d=1422999064
Thanks guys, fourty I admit I didn’t see your crits until just now. I’ve been sick since the last post so today was my first foray back into modeling since christmas basically. I noticed a couple of the things you did, especially the ridiculously thick palms, I will check out the other stuff, thanks.
As for today, I got her mostly posed and ready for marvelous.
Two more, they wouldn’t let me attach these, maybe too many images.
Oh i luurve your work mate. Pure beauty.
lovely work. I love the face!!!
your job is very good, congratulations
With the animal.
so great. the sweetness of her face kills me!
The coracobrachialis placement is really bugging me please check it, I might be wrong I’m not sure
Been watching your progress over FB, man! Great stuff! Love your figurative sculpts!
Thanks man. I had my wife pose for me and took some pictures to try and get stuff like this right, but I admit I might have misplaced it. I will double check.
Getting the dress together.
Oh wow. This is coming out great. Her dress is extremely well done
I also started the spots but they’re going to take me forever, only have one side right now.
Love the pose and overall feel.
I love this! can’t wait to see more.
Looking great. Can’t wait to see the next post and watch this piece finalized. Great work