Here is an update on my archangel’s torso. I’m trying to add more detail but still trying to make him look like a comic hero and less like a real human. Let me know of any crits!! Thx
Very cool Jay. Nice work on the proportions. For me personally, I would make him a bit leaner and not as built, if only for practicality, since he has wings and can fly, you would want to reduce as much weight as possible. However, you did say you wanted to make him more comic booky than real, so in that sense it works.
Nice new sculpt, and that Green Lantern render is almost perfect, nice 
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Here is the pose I think I’m going with. Some things that are missing: wings, better hand positioning, boot detail, some other posable symmetry fixes and maybe fixing his neck a little. Other than that just texturing I guess. The idea in this whole composition is Archangel being ready for take off. Let me know of any crits!
Oh… I really like the pose. Looking very very cool.
Thanx. I really have to fix the hands. They need some serious work. I’m still debating whether to use his classic colors (blue and magenta) or his grey and metallic silver devilish uniform. I’m thinking the latter.
I think I’m going to try and go for this look. Pretty devilish huh?
I’ve made some revisions to my Archangel. Why does it take a freaking hour to make a fist? Maybe I’m slow. Welcome to any crits!
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Looks Great, I think though his hand doesn’t look like he is putting enough weight on it to me, like maybe his fingers should have more of a bend or splay a bit more? Really show he is putting weight on those fingers.
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That´s awesome.
Yeah I think I’ll mash is fingers down a little more to simulate some weight distribution. Good one, thanks.
Here is some possible texturing
Hi Bladeflush! Shoul’ve dropped you a line sooner, cause I really like your sketchbook worx! Your latest sculpt is looking very good - an hour on the fist- was time well spent cause it’s lookin’ great! !
I had to pause on Archangel and work on my DW IV submission. Here it is so far. Let me know of any crits.
great great work an inspiration
but i am searching for the lantern or the ring which gives them all the power
or my eyes missed somethin on the info
his left hand gloves i find somethin lacking in there my eyes just dont accept his
left hand gloves dont know why
but overall its the best of the best work around
as i always say keep em comin
yo yo yo thanks a ton man you must have saved a lots of people life
Started on the armor. He’s getting there slowly but surely.
Very fitting for DW4. Is the skull shoulder piece a sub object? layer? or simply sculpted on? Either way, super cool!
The skull shoulder pad is a subtool, yes. I melded 2 objects with mesh insert to make one subtool acutally.
Here is more work from the weekend.
