you drew your proportions grid out - but you’re not using it as far as i can tell.
A mistake I also make is to overly define the abs - on a heroic male character that is forgivable, but on a female character it just looks weird. Females generally have more lower torso fat that would cover such up or at least ‘blur’ it a bit. i don’t mean to harsh you but there are literally too many errors to address in writing. the eyes are way to visible in the side view - probably because they are far to wide.
stay with the Ryan Kingslien info he’ll set you right.
copying classical statues where another artist has already simplified and abstracted the forms helps me tremendously. check out the torso on any Greek female statue and compare it to your’s and you’ll see what i mean. good luck!