Heya.
I’m not a specialist but heare are few things I notice:
Hope it’s ok to point that out. Good luck with your sculpt@!
thnx nebular for pointing it out,
thats what i was hoping for to get some feeback and crits
heres an update: 
really good start,good luck with youre projects , hands look a bit to loong
facial update
hey guys just an doodle in between off my anatomy tryout
just started over again on anatomy, first used a basemesh to dynamesh for getting the proportions right then retopo,
all the body parts and now started working on the face blocking in most off the shapes, i think im on the right track now starting to look a lot on my reference images,
so guys lemme know what you see?
it nevver hurts to let it check by another set of eyes does it ?
thnx and greetz jack
hi there… well you have a start there.
its little bit to narrow between the eye’s, the nose is also to narrow.
show a pic here how you can think. this is the geneal idea if a face build up.
As you see your ears is little bit to high also.
Well you have a good start there. dont give up on it.
Brush let it be little ruff. dare to push and grip and cut in it so you can feel the shapes.
Good luck
/cheers
Lepra
thnx lepra i’ve adjusted my eyes and mouth so it corresponds to the image you gave me, and some slight adjustments overal, so here is what i came up with for now
grtz jack
hey guys i think i did it, finally a anatomic female thats correct, at least i think so, so if you see some errors please point them out, so i can adjust them. thnx in advance
grtz jack
hey guys still workin on my current project but i seem to have a problem, i was trying to get the likeness correct but i just can’t seem to grasp where im going wrong with it
some c&c are verry welcome here
thnx
Jacked
Nose is too short and the wings of the nostrils are not rounded and tilted enough. The width of the Jaw isn’t wide enough. The ears ‘face’ the viewer more. The lower eyelid needs more curves to look like a horizontal “s”. The mouth isn’t as wide as in your model.
It would be worth the effort to find a side view of the lady and work from that view also. It may be best to go back to the dynamesh and make corrections there before trying to retopo.
the lower nose is off also. more of the dived between the nostrils is visible lower for starters. the cut you’ve made north of the nostrils is not as sharp in the photo - and there is soft mass above said cut also, giving the nose more of a triangle look rather than the upside down ‘T’ you’ve got now. hope this helps.
Its hard to get a likeness but best thing to do to make sure your in the right direction is literally take a step back and grab a screengrab of your sculpt/model, put it beside or 50% opacity over the ref image in photoshop and visually see where you are going wrong etc.
I grabbed the ref image and overlayed it on both versions of your sculpt, the green lines show where her eyes/nose/ears/ mouth are on the photo compared to those on your sculpt. I reckon if you at least get those a closer match then shaping the rest of the face should be easier.
thnx for the advice i’ve got a whole bunch of pictures from her shes a metart model, but it was hard to find a picture where she was looking straight in the camera this is the best ive could find,
ill put up my ref images front and side together with some screenshots of my sculpt for now after the adjustments.
thnx again grtz jacked
hey guys ,heres a new head sculpt i did in between
grtz jacked 
hey guy’s i was just trying some stuff from ryans tutorials and then i was thinking why not try to make ryan himself, so after working on it for around 4-6 hours i think im finished,
mayb colorize it someday, still havent started on the polypaint really focussing on likeness now.
c&c’s are verry welcome,
greetz jacked
hey guys after sculpting ryan, and watching his tutorials i finally had an other look @ the bust i was trying to create of jenya from met art, i think the likeness is better now,
not perfect but im going the right way i believe, please some c&c’s
thnx
Jacked
knock down the sub division levels while you affect sculptural changes…tell tale signs that your doing too much at too high a sub division level…go high for surface details only
