Great progression through out your thread. Canāt wait to see how big brother turns out.
zberry: Thanks! I have been practicing a lot. Im glad there is a noticeable progression. Hopefully the proportions look better
Gary Komar: Thanks
wdcstudios: Thanks
Heres an up
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Looks good. Only things that look a bit off to me is the lines on the pectorals create a sort of strange connection between the pectorals and the sternal notch, and they donāt seem to be adhering to the direction of the fibers, Aside from that, Iād take a look at perhaps bulking up the obliques and adding some serratus definition.
Otherwise I canāt seem to find any issues.
Twitch: Thanks man! Ill definitely give his obliques another run through. Im not satisfied with them anyway.
Im done with the anatomy at this point since most of his body will be clothed. Put blood on his hands for the hell of it. Wanted to mess around with ZApp link and textures.
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Good job youāre improving fast!
Darukin: Thanks man! Appreciate that!
Heres an up and i have to say, I LOVE ZAPP LINK!
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Nice work, a brutal looking dude.
Aberrant: Thanks. I still have a bit more to do on him.
Finished getting the feel of the character. Gonna change his pants to brown like the concept art i posted earlier and see how it looks. Going to start messing up his face and give him some more personality. Also now that i have the clothes on him i know what areas i can really focus on and spend my time on all the anatomy. Thanks for all the crits and coms!
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thatsā one bloody character 
Love the progress, itās starting to look really great.
Good job on the anatomy so far, I especially like his head.
keep going!
I liked the previous post better because it looks like he used only his hands to kill some one. If you are going for more brutality it makes sense what you have done, but you should add some blood splats on his pectorals and wherever the blood is on the edge of his shirt, it should also be on his skin. It looks like he put on a bloody shirt today otherwise. Good work though, just my crits.
d_lavega: Thanks. Worked a bit more on the face. Especially the ears. They were so bad!
Aberrant: Thanks for the crit. I was looking at it after i posted and it hit me that he needed some blood on his skin around the shirt area as well.
Heres another up! Really like the look of this render.
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Decided to inbreed his face and finished up the blood.
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Wow this is really coming along keep up the good work.
This is really shaping up nicely. I think the new face you did really adds to the character. Great work!
Heya! Cool work! His face remind me of Jason
You could add some more dark blood splates, thick black blood. Just an idea!
wdcstudios: Thanks!
Aberrant: Thanks! I was really nervous about it. Glad it came out well.
foxymop: Ooooh! Good idea!
heey buddy, nice works here)))
rodion vlasov: Thanks! Your progression has been incredible. Have you posted anything in a while? I havent got an email about your thread in a long time!
Here he is posed. Gonna add about 3 or 4 more characters to this scene. Keep a look out!
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haha i like face alot:D
ps i send pm to you;)
when you posed him it got three times as good!
Cool!