Very good work. The mole man is great 
Skias Onar - thanks for the comments
Ok, so here’s where im at right now. Thinking sci-fi girl with some sort of jet pack or something on her back.
Looking for suggestions/crits
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the kenness and ankles parts dont look good to me, considering how close is teh bodysuit to her actuall body, it would imply those parts go throught her flesh, you schould make them look more like the part of the suit not the body. But besides that i really love the model, looks amazing !
Awesome job man! Love the mole man, are you gonna texture him? The girl is coming along nicely, I think you should try to make her look kind of futuristic A jetpack sounds pretty cool, maybe you can connect the strap around her upper torso to the jet back. Just my 2 cents… Love the progress cant wait to see more, by the way where did u get your zmaterials, that red looks awesome.
I like what’s going on so far… Looking like one techno gal. Great sculpt work!
slocik - thanks, i agree with you on the knee and ankle part of the model. So, i smoothed them down, havent rescuplted the knee and ankle yet.
cashfire - thank you, yeah i plan on finishing the sculpt of the mole over this work week. than start texturing it. i’ll probably just keep the female as a weekend project.
SolidSnakexxx - thanks, glad you’re liking it!
Here’s a small update…put a jet pack and ankle thrusters on her…I don’t like either one. I have a few new ideas i’ll flush out soon for the jet pack.
C&C welcome!
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here’s a small update…tried some new ideas for the jetpack part.
Let me know what you think!
thanks
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Hi jjvdb15,
I certainly love the 1st new jetpack.
But I think it would be nice if you design it foldable, since its much of annoying when she try to sit down…hehehh.
The first one is more curvy, suits your girl, the second I feel too bulky for her.
Looks like heavier than her body 
. . .
Wait a minute, where is her small jet on her heels?
_Revel
The first one is more interesting from a silhouette standpoint, and it also looks more feminine.
love the first one, it’s got a really cool shape to it!
the second one has been done before many times
Id go more with the first one, but it looks a little weird to me, maybe smaller, or try playing with the shape of it. Its a pretty good design, but doesnt really say jetpack to me…Maybe its just me, cant wait to see the next update, keep it up.
I agree with DustinBrown, weigh in the balance and balance the weight, so to speak, the center of gravity is important in selling us the concept/design, however fantastical, and those new jetpacks just don’t cut it… good work otherwise…
Revel - thanks, decided to ditch both jet packs and go with something less fantastic.
dustinbrown - agreed. thanks for you thoughts, always appreciated.
wasa - thanks
cashfire - thanks, hope you like the new design
guringo - Yeah, i think youre right that neither design were very good.
Small Update…hopefully there wont be any confusion that this is a jetpack. went for something sleeker and fitted.
Crits are very welcome
cool looking concept, kinda reminds me of dark void
All around fantastic works!
I’m excited to see where you take this new concept. I would hope that you keep some of the unique forms from the earlier designs of the jet packs. Maybe make the “arms”, like you had in the previous versions, smaller, so that they would act more as a stabilizer rather than the main force of propulsion? Just thinking out loud…
If you think her rear is pretty ‘hot’ now…wait for the heat of the exhaust…
Is that a new jetpack?..well I think her lower back will suffer from the heat by her jetpack. You need to consider how the jetpack gonna work.
Looking forward for your next update!
_Revel
latest update on the jetpack looks way better. much more believable. but you should split it up a bit. maybe by different colour areas later, warm colour for gas and cold colour for air. so she got a air/gas jetpack. or you could seperate the areas so you got a ‘stick-together’ pack where both parts fit to one part.
my english isn’t that good, i’m sorry for that but maybe you understand what i mean.
really nice sculpts in this thread! I like your style!
JohnYip - thanks
Moops - thanks for the input, i hope you’ll like my new design. kind of along the same concept
3Point14 - hahaha love the humor.
Revel - yeah. Thats a flaw in my design
Al.Tintop - no problem! i understood what you were trying to say…i think youre right too, hopefully this new design will be better
gordon-v - thanks, ive been likeing your sculpts recently myself
Ok, so did a few new things…main idea now is that the jet pack from before is an air conversion chamber…where the big hole is a vacuum and the side holes emit anything thats not oxygen. Built separate wing thrusters from a concept that Paul Richards did.
Hope you like
C&C always welcome
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