Hahah…dude you just getting better and better everytime you update your work!
Very inspired, critic from others will always make your work better, good to see you open for a critic and really apply it into your design
But I’m still wondering though, what is your consideration of ditching the small jet at her heels? cus I found it myself its a cool little stuff when you put it down there…It really interesting to know the “how and why” when a good designer make decision on his/ her design progress.
Cheers
_Revel