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Xenier's Sketchbook (slight nudity)

ok, after the critique, I realized I still had ALOT of work to do, here’s the re-sculpt so far. re-do_2.jpg

any thoughts/ feedback is encouraged!
re-do_3.jpg

I like this guy - here are my critiques -

  1. The ear - just seems not enough mass in the flesh - the thickness at the top for example is almost like paper
  2. The scars - they still look to me like a brush stroke - after you make the brush stroke it helps to go back in and hand work the anatomy of a scar by hand - I still am exploring how to do it so I can’t be truly specific other than that, but I think you will know what I mean
  3. The lips need a bit more detail I think - the bead of fat under the bottom lip would be a bit more pronounced I am thinking and the lips look like they are connected rather than a top and bottom - just a deeper cut pulled back and make sure they are not overlapping would do the trick there I think

Very nice stylization - like this very much and I realize my critiques are extremely nit-picking:).

excellent, thank you! and Nit picky is exactly what I want, that way I can get better.

I like it… it have personnality. I think what you have to do is to focus on all detail to get them more realistic .

ok, here’s a render with the updated features
re-do_3.jpg

here’s a character I’ve been working on, Still not finished but getting close Mage.jpg

hey the dwarf is coming along a lot better now. He’s losing a lot of weight and that’s a good thing! :slight_smile: I would suggest to really focus on getting the eyelids more smooth and unlumpified and make them “hold” the eyeball a lot more. Gather some good reference off the internet and really spend the time cleaning up that area. It’s all about practice and observation. Good job getting him this far!

I agree - the lids need more mass like you added to the ears - I never even noticed that before - good call Jesse:).

thanks for the comments, gotta finish the mage first, then back to the dwarf!

here’s the Mages Sword sword.jpg

here’s the 98% completed Battlemage

render.jpg

A posting of my most recent work. Let me know what you all think, I’m not sure about the mace.

Quem_3.jpg

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Quem_5.jpg

Is it a QUEM Orc?
Looks exactly like a model i did for Platinum Lion :wink:

Yes indeed, It is based off of your original Sculpt. Good thing you saw this, saves me the time of hunting you down to give you credit for the initial sculpt lol.

:wink:
no problems
Where did you saw my model?

I would like to see some wires or a work in progress of this guy. Overall it looks good right now.

marianosteiner, if you have a link to the original model you did that would be nice to see for a comparison to this one.

Edit: The proportions look a little off if you’re going for normal human proportions, his legs aren’t long enough for the body. If you’re not looking for human proportions ignore this edit.

Yea, it’s not meant to have human proportions. here is the concept:
quem-turn.jpg
I’ll get to posting some WIP and wires later today.

Marianosteiner - Platinum Lion actually.

Scrapped the mace, here’s the new sword.
Blade.jpg