UMM MISTAKE
So i have been really buy with stuff and Finally i am back on this project. I got job with lucas films 4 months ago and i had to move. So now i am all settle and i got my self an awesome new machine and now i can make more POLYGONs! wooo!
so here is an update.
I did her feet armor, Also gave her another piece of armor on her right arm. and some quickies on her clothes on zbrush. any comments are welcome
thanks guys
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this looks pretty cool…really like the clean shapes and overall feeling… pose looks pretty natural! wanna see updates!!
P.S. - really admire your passion for retopo 
Here, Did some changed to the pants. I hope you guys will like it any critics are welcome. lot of inspirations!!!
wrinkles are not done yet. I am still deciding on what kind of matrial the parts will be:)
Also hair idea. My friend alice helped me with hair design Thanks alice
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It has a soft elegance to it. Love the detailing.
This is extremely good. Will be watching this.
Looking good! !
rajbirD,
Isn’t it great when you get truely constructive crits from people who know their stuff on anatomy? As I am also working on a female character, so I’m watching your progress here with great interest. I really enjoy your evolution of clothing design. It looks like you also have fun constructing the weapondry making it functional as you go along. Since I can’t show my work an you are this thread is like a mini-bible. Also, like your work ethic, and your design sense.
Gary
Beautiful job - just came across this! Love the way you’ve stuck with it and improved the model. What happened to the vyborg idea, that could have turned out interesting. Any possibility on following up with that?
hyper 1 - Thanks for the beautiful comment. I am glad you enjoyed the progress.
JimCrafton - I dropped the idea on cyborg. I was having issues with designing the body. BUT! i am doing a cyborg (Sort of ) for DW5. I dont have any thing decent to show at the moment i am still in design phase.
Wow…how did I miss this… This is beautiful…very lovely work!
Hey RajbirD
Really nice work here! I love the detail work that you have done on her belt and other trinkets, your topology work is especially good.
My only crits would be that the hands are looking a little strange, especially the pose on the thumb, and also they are maybe a bit small.
I also think that the breast plate could have a more flattering shape as the degree of separation between the breasts makes them look a little unnatural. I know its hard armour plating, but i think it should be shaped a bit more to look like the breasts would fit comfortably inside.
Asides from this I think its top rate work and I cant wait to see how it progresses. 5 stars from me mate, keep it up. :D
I loved her pendant. Did you retopologize that? That must have been difficult. Her hips and legs need more work to do. She looks more of a teenager, than a woman right now.
You’ve managed to keep the mesh so clean!
soulty666 - Thank you
EricShawn - Thank you Eric
Etcher - Thanks mate
SolidSnakexxx - I really hope you dont miss it anymore. From my side i’ll try to make it interesting
Sinhouse - I do agree with you on the breasts part. But i have came way too far to go back and fix it, I mean i can fix it but i would have to do it in the tpose and Pose her again :/. But i really agree with you,
About the thumb part. She has weapons,. Once i finish those i will pose her fingers and wrap them around the weapons :). Thank you very much for the critics, they were helpful.
unonymouz - Hello. No I did didn’t do retopo for the pendant. I modeled it like that and then i changed some design in zbrush. For her age, i did that on purpose , i wanted her to look young, If you look at my earlier posts she looks older. I also requested moderators to change the name of the thread from women to Alea Raveh.
great work … i think u should relax the adam’s apple on her =)
First off congrats on the job (I’m jealous). Secondly I love the progress on this and I have now named it sweet cheeks which i believe is self explanatory. I really like that other lady in the red head garmet you are working on as well!
Finally i have some time to work on it again! i will post some updates soon. thank you everyone. Also didn’t want the thread to die