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Velociraptor W.i.p

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#1

Hello all!!

This is my first model in ZBRUSH I start this guy about a week ago,not much time to work on it but this is how its going so far.

Comments are aways welcome!:smiley:

Thanks

Marcos Correa
2d-3d Animator
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#2

Try rotating the direction of the hands. Raptors werenā€™t capable of holding
their hands in the ā€œPlaying the Pianoā€ pose you have them now (despite what Jurassic Park depicted - they still looked cool though :wink: ). They should be like heā€™s holding a box.

Its hard to tell with the perspective, but your tail may need to be longer. Dromeosaurs had very long tails - like balancing poles - to keep them agile.

If your going for accuracy, Velociraptor had a thinner snout and should have feathers. What you have now more closely resembles ā€œDeinonychusā€ which in reality the raptors in JP were.

Your muscles around the chest area are a bit weird. Get some ref off the internet for theropod muscles.

Other than that, you have good form and wicked detail.:+1:

#3

Juravenator - sounds like you know your dinosaurs.

I dont know anything about dinosaurs, but this one looks pretty cool, I think the tail should be longer too like Juravenator said, I just wanted to say it reminds me of Yoshi from the Mario brothers movie. haha.

are you going to animate this??

#4

nice work. detail look great. :+1: :wink:

#5

wow, amazing detail!

#6

wowā€¦this is niceā€¦
the detail and color look really beautiful:D

#7

wow that raptor looks very nice :wink:
how did you do that? I looking for nice tutorials how to make dinos :stuck_out_tongue: becous I trying to make a Jurassic park game :slight_smile:

#8

the raptor is looking really nice! the only crit i have is that the skin texture may bee a little over done. when you look at it from a distance it starts looking a bit grainy if you know what iā€™m getting at. i have had that problem before and i think keeping an organized level of detail helps a lot! using layers is a really good thing for skin textures. just a thought. for your first model in zbrush that is amazing! iā€™m looking foward to seeing some more from you soon! cheers!

#9

oh dude, this thing is sweeeeet!
totally amazing for your first go, you should
be very proud of it. canā€™t wait to see the
final! going in my scrapbook for sure!

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#10

Awesome raptor. Love the detailing.

Cheers
Brett

#11

I agree with Juravenator about the hands (arms )
I donā€™t know much about dinos

#12

Wow! That looks great! Now all he needs is some eyballs. :wink: :+1:

#13

woooo~~!!
amazing details on the texture,keep up!
canā€™t wait for more update!:+1:

#14

great work but it will looking much better if the head ll be 150% big from this.

great workā€¦

#15

cool work, i would like to see it with eyes and in material it would be necessary to add a little bit of to the smooth surface.:slight_smile: :+1: