here pubic to greater trocanter has to strong of a defanition.
Hands need a little more thickness.
from the side the ass looks good but from back it needs work its the right shape but way to pronounced sticking sharply out.
The body length is out of proportion.
Measure from the greater trochanter to the ball of her feet and then measure from greater trochanter to the top of her head these lengths are supposed to be pretty much the same.
The side of the breasts to the rib cage to prominent smother transition.
The face looks to be still in somewhat of a blocking stage but I will give you some idea’s to work on.
The brow to the nose the sharp edge should be a rounded mound of a edge.
The inner ear it should look more like a (y) inside use a reference to get it right.
the eye’s are a bit large all most like manga style the real human eye is much squinty looking.
The sharp crease around the lips I’m not fond of it but I can’t say it wrong yet because I feel your going to add detail to the lips that should smooth down the look of the crease but at this moment it just a start contrast from sharp edge to smooth lip.
Work on these things or not and lets see were you take this from here.
Good luck.