hi this is a character ive been working on still got work to do on him but this is how he looks so far hope you like him 
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dig the spine! keep it up
amazing armour bro…
realy nice…
I like the spine as well, I think the form
is really cool - first read is all thumbs up…
On a second read there are some small
things that can make a big improvement-
I’d suggest getting rid of the stitches
all together, maybe use a higher freq.
texture for that under-garmet… maybe
a leather or similar matte surface would
function well in there…
other thing would be to give a little
tlc to the shoulders (backside) the
repetition of that crack alpha is a
bit overpowering – but that may be
my jaded eyes talking…
just curious, are you planning to
build out hands at all or mind explaining
how the current config is intended to
operate?
stylin’! keep at it 
Good job!
But you need to refine the subtle details.
hi everyone thanks for your comments and thanks super glitcher for pointing out the things i need to rectify you are right about the back of the arms as for the idea behind the charactor the original concept was a close assault unit armed with 2 large sythe like blades then i thought it would be cool if the charactor was equiped with a heavy wepon on its back that could used when it crouches down here are a couple more pictures i havent had time to redo the back of the arms or the vest il post more when i get time to work on them 
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