Any time. That’s why people post on forums in the first place, right? To get some feedback and grow. And to get some attention 
It’s good that you’re still testing the look, but the eyes are much better than they were in the first post.
What I want to add regarding the “not standard” look of some faces, it’s true, there are some rather interesting looking people, but it doesn’t mean that you need to model them like that if there is no intention for it. If you’re trying to break from the generic big jaw muscle guy look, no need to go into extremes by adding some oddity to the face. It’s almost like modeling or sculpting a woman face for the first time. It’s actually harder to create soft and subtle forms and make them read as female features. That’s why some people would exaggerate the size of the lips or eyes. Same here, by careful placement of the features and proportions you can get a very natural looking face, no need to add something extra to it.
But that’s just me rambling… I’m pretty sure the eyes just came out like that on your model, there was no intention to make them look…strange in any way 