Hey-hey!
I would like to request a crritique and help from the community
This time I post an early sculpt so I can get corrected earlier (unlike the previous sculpt I’ve requested help for on the later stages of the project, were correcttions were hard to introduce).
Please, could you correct me where I am wrong with major proportions?
I really cannot get a good advice somewhere outside forums, so any help would be greatly appreciated 
Here is an UPD:
First version:










