shavedmonkey
I noticed it too and tried to fix it. If it didnt work out, i’ll think of something else.
threetails
Then u gonna turn into one of them soon 
(Next fool moon)
Blaine91555
It is! I’m so embarresed to put it here, near real artists.
Maybe this one is better?
klesh you are an artisit as well and you are on the path of getting to higher levels which what all artists do no matter what level they are
for your image i think it is really cool i only would like it more if there is a lamp light in the room or something … just to break the darkness and capturing more details from the models and it could be my personal opinion too.
good work and good luck.
Nice, very moonlit feel to it, great stuff. Perhaps a candle or night light could break up the foreground a bit to highlight your superb models 
Great work Klesh - you have nothing to be embarassed about at all, your work is among the best in the competition. Maybe you don’t have the experience of some of the ZB masters, but you have more than made up for it with your idea and the atmosphere. I agree with nightwoodwolf that you could put a little more light to highlight some detail, but don’t overdo it - keep the moonlit feel, as shavedmonkey says. I also like the monochrome colour, but maybe a little use of colour in tints (a sort of half way effect) could be good. Keep it up, you are nearly there!
Jason
Thank’s so much you all (:
I tried to fix the darkness.
I don’t like the result… maybe because of the mess, or maybe cuz i liked the previous version too much ((:
Here it is:
Klesh,
You definitely should keep posting, you know how to tell a story in a piece of art and though you might not feel your the best here(so many good pro’s and what not here) you definitely show you have ability and willingness to make it grow. This work shows that and I am happy how it turned out along with how quickly you where able to put majority of it together. Really digging this last render with the added candle though it worked just fine without it, enjoyed em both, only thing that has really bugged me is the jaggedness around the painted pupil outer edge.
Keep up the great work, will be watching for more!! 
I think you’ve done great work and I like the piece. Just remember that the deadline is November 2nd so you still have time to tweak and make a few corrections. I think it would be worth it.
If this may help, I could give you some suggestions.
I like the colors on everything except the bed and blanket. I think that’s the reason why everything looks so dark. If you could change the color of the blanket to something warmer and lighter in color and then maybe change the color of the bed to resemble wood or stone, that would help.
I honestly don’t think you need a window because it detracts from the scene. If you could make a stand of some kind for the candle and put it next to the bed, then use lighting to just light him enough to see him, the bed, and the children with slight illumination to show the cave walls would help.
Just a thought.
waaayyyyyyyyyyyyy coOOooOOoool
candle looks good, piece really feels like a lot of care has gone into it.
Very good light scene and composition!
Hi all.
Thank you 
Sorry if i didnt fixed as u said, just didnt have enough time. I hope tomorrow i’ll have some time.
Love it! nice idea, and lighting.
Aaah… cool!! 
Looks good! the candle cured the problem of lighting. Well done!
This one really made me laugh!
One thing: I was not sure where the monster’s face stopped and the blanket took over. You might think about changing the colour of the blanket a little bit to distinguish it from the creature.
Cheers,
R
Klesh, this work will be high ranked if you can fix your problems.
Your modeling is amazing and superb.
The overall idea and composition is great, all characters are perfectly placed.
Your light-setup is OK, your problems are the lights and where to put darkness and slight brightness.
I would try this in your place:
First, change the skin-color of your monster back to the warmer reddish-tone you previously had. Let the baby-zombies in the green tones.
Then you get your needed contrast between the monster as the warm, living and ‘good’ element and the zombie-babies as the dead, evil ones.
In your latest attempt the main-baby under the bed has a much too bright face and the skin is too red for a zombie.
The light-reflection on the bed-sheet is much too bright.
So keep it up and you will have a top5 result at the end.
Rastaman
Thanks (:
I didnt make them look like zombies, because it wasnt the idea in the first place (: I didnt want to make fundamental changes whan so close to the end. But thanks for constructional advice (:
I tried to follow most of the advices.
I did the best i could ((:
I hope i didnt disappoint you all.
This is the final version… i think.
THANK YOU ALL. I had lots of fun. GL!
Ha! Love the expressions and those evil babies. Nicely done!
This came out really nice! you did well here! you listened to what others said and advised but in the end you made this image your own. Well done! this one is up there with the winners. :D