Much better!
This is actually coming along quite nicely! This model has lots of potential! Keep going, but like you were told in your good responses especially by kursadk, right now, even with high resolution, focus on the main forms and I would avoid tiny details until the main large and medium sized forms are blocked in and defined nicely and ‘clearly’ and thats its working well together etc, clear definition of the forms should help this, pinch (and flatten and clay) brush should be useful.
If you press alt key (for ZSub) while using pinch brush it should also give nice effect, as well as well using masks like others said. But like I said this is coming along quite well as it is, you seemed to have done all that mostly!