This is a redux. I was working on it once before and I got distracted by another (assigned) project. But I have a new rule about finishing what I start so I’m getting back to this.
Please, please, I would love some critique.She’ll have a shirt when I’m done, plus some decent hair if I can manage it. The shoes are Tom’s, and the jeans are just tattered jean shorts.
Made some tweaks and I think it’s a bit better for it. Hair is much closer to where I’d like it to be, but still not exactly there. I think the front view needs something more.
Again, critiques are welcome, helpful and more appreciated than I can say. Also suggestions.
hi! looks very good so far! a few thoughts… the neck is very slim, you could widen it. more dfenition on the legs! especialy around the knee area if you look att the profile, something looks off with the ankels… other than that, nice and refreshing body type!
lookforward to an update!
peace
@Crazyhorse - Thank you sir, tips much appreciated.
So here’s more stuff. I ditched the idea of ‘Toms’ canvas flats for being too easy. Choosing to do half-boots instead, which are more complicated and a better visual (I think, if I’m wrong call me out).
Anyways, this update is the face, the boots (almost done, working left to right), and minor things. Also, as a foot note, the teeth are ridiculous and I am aware of it. I wanted to give her buck-teeth and I was just testing them real quick to make sure it worked with the natural ‘neutral’ mouth pose.
Next up is the shirt and I’m considering leggings, but I need a good way to do them. Anyone with any experience adding that sort of ‘wrap’ geometry to an existing model?
Crits and comments appreciated.
Finished shoes and a leggings test.
I like the way the shoes turned out. Looking forward to getting them into an engine and working out the materials. The sole needs a bit of love but that’s a details thing if I have time.
I’m looking for opinions on the leggings. I have my own opinion, but I don’t want to bias anyone so I’ll keep it to myself. Opinions on that greatly appreciated. Also on anything else.
Thanks for looking.
