Hey Everyone,
An Overly Defined Male Character.
The overly defined back before I changed it for this character.
Cheers,
Nate Nesler
Hey Everyone,
An Overly Defined Male Character.
The overly defined back before I changed it for this character.
Cheers,
Nate Nesler
Did you notice some people get response to their work more then others regardless of how good it is.
I post work here now and then and no one ever reply’s with comments are criticism.
Your model is just as good as most stuff on this forum, but I noticed you have no feedback.
MatrixNaN, nice work… I cannot give a decent critique, as your anatomy skills are better than mine
Wissler, are you just copying and pasting the same comments on all your replies?
Hey Everyone,
Lead Balloon: I thought I might give you some good references which might help you out. I had to study all of the muscles and bones under the skin before I could do character sculpts. Then I started studying how the bones and muscles weighted on each other and what impact they had on each other. The next stage I am into is sculpting skin tension, fat systems etc. Its a lot of work but I think it pays for its self.
Books on Amazon:
1 An Atlas of Anatomy for Artist $10.36 1
1 Drawing the Human Head $13.57 1
1 Dynamic Anatomy $15.72 1
1 Dynamic Figure Drawing $13.57 1
1 Dynamic Wrinkles and Drapery $15.30 1
1 The Figure in Motion $13.57 1
1 Artistic Anatomy $15.72 1
1 Drawing Dynamic Hands $13.57 1
1 The Artist’s Complete Guide t $22.05 1
Reference for Human Anatomy:
http://www.reybustos.com/04er/er.html
http://www.reybustos.com/03ra/ra.htm
http://www.freedom-of-teach.com/products/prod_category.php?sect=products&pid=cat_anatomy
Also primal pictures DVD set of Anatomy is very very useful.
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Cheers,
Nate Nesler
This is a bit gross, in terms of proportions. Rather than inflating all of the muscles, how about increasing their definition so all of the connections are clearly seen. He’s isn’t overlly defined yet, just juiced up if you know what I mean. The spaces between the muscles should be more defined, which will as a result define the muscles more. I also doubt you would see that much of the spine if he has this heavy of muscles. The lower back seems to have extra muscles as well. Where are all of the muscles of the forearm? Also the pants could be defined more as well, they really blend into the legs and loose form. You do have the wrinkles correct it seems, that’s an area I’m not good with myself. How’s that for a crit? Sorry I’m a bit harsh today.
Hey Womball,
Cheers,
Nate Nesler
Have you studied from cadavers? I wouldn’t totally rely on books, because the artist could make mistakes. You didn’t mention that he was a bat man like guy. I just thought he had deformed ears, from say a boxing match. As for level 6 subdivision, that detail is from the normal and bump maps. I’m using XSI as well.
Hey Womball,
http://www.primalpictures.com/Index.aspx
Cheers,
Nate Nesler
Your still adding definition to the latissum dorsi which are not there even in these models you showed me. Unless your making the muscles really really thin there. That looks pretty cool though that model, I bet its expensive though.
Hey Womball,
primal pictures student pricing
Cheers,
Nate Nesler