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Nude Female in need of critiques (nudity)

Lumin8: I cant say at t this time what its for. But its not for anything that requires animation and rigging and will stay in zbrush. (thats why I have to sculpt the hair) I grabed a front on for you <3 Not perspective though, opps =/

I liked the chit chat. Gives me something interesting to giggle at xD

Wim: Yeah the lips are my biggest annoyance right now. But I did try and adjust them a bit I’m being sneaky! xD

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At this point I would just make small modifications to the material and lighting. It’s almost perfect, it just needs a little more to give it life. Nice work.

Looks fantastic man. The material is great, what is it?

Are you going to render this in another renderer in the end?

wtg on blending that hair. I was wondering about that in the other shot and forgot to mention it. lol. The ears look right on now. Lips are looking good too! One question. What material are you using for the skin?

Twitch: Thanks man, I will have a go at playing around with the texture some more. I dont know much about lighting though, will have to see if it affects the model in realtime.

Pap: Hey thanks :smiley: The skin material is a custom material we use inhouse, I moified it a bit and added some noise and changed the colours. The hair and eyelashes uses the default gorilla matcap and the eyes use good ol toy plasitc :smiley:

Lumin : <3 Cheers mate. I’m glad the ears are better now. I had to tweak them quite a bit cause they got smoothed out at some point in time D:

Anyway Here she is, I did a quick transpose using transpose master. Its really cool to use for transposing. Though I was really messy with it and the clothes all tied into knots and her hads and feet got all twisted and broken. But it was fun to play around with. I wil have to have a serious go some time. But right now I’m kinda sick of working on her. I need a break :stuck_out_tongue:

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I liek the pose a lot. Everything seems to have a weight to it and deforms properly. Perhaps the head is slightly too large in relation to the body.

Cool sculpting ! :cool:

It’s absolutely fantastic. Really superb job of texturing, and great pose. Only critique is that the ears are about 10% too big on the head, shrink them just a bit, and that model is perfect, in my opinion. :+1: :+1: :+1:

nice bum, the material still doesnt seem perfected though, if youre going to keep it in zbrush, theres no harm in taking your times messing around perfecting the material.

Nice pose.
I’m guessing you just haven’t gotten to it yet, but all the same incase you didn’t think of it you should put some wrinkling on the concave part of the body if you get what I mean. Also flatten the butt where it’s in contact with the ground and perhaps bulge it some more at the back so it maintains its volume. And lastly the armpits in the front view match up but in the back her right armpit looks a bit too low.

I look forward to the next update! :+1:

Nux: Glad u were havin’ fun kiddo, Add some popcorn nd a jinxed man’s head for a popcorn disposal unit n everything will be gr8!:+1:

Thanks 4 the complement…I need more practice myself…U on the other hand should aim… Higher…n u’ll get even Better then good.

I’ve always liked that pose… there r some things in her weight that need to be better… her right arm… In that pose… the forearm is sopossed to be slightly bended out, that means the elbow should be slightly bent inwards towards her torso, that will show her weight better…If u extend ur arm to its’ full extent…it’s never a strait line, it’ll bend a bit at the elbow in the opposit direction…the digree of it varies on an individual base, but it’s there.
Look at her right knee too… at some point it’s gonna decide to run off on it’s own, go 4 milk shakes n come back…there was a long lost movie on something like that 4 a hand!

Keep it up

Lum: Glad it’s not so painful 4 ya!:laughing:
Why maybe?? post buddy as soon as you’re happy with her/him…I’ll be waiting 4 ya to do so, At least I’ll have something to damn u about 4 not finishing!

Hope you don’t mind my little paint over ond the ear and lips. :wink:
Although I know that the lips could be a matter of taste and / or target.

keep up the good work :slight_smile:

Klaus
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