I read windmill after about 10 min, which idk if that’s what you’re going for. I’m all for dream art as it is, it’s not surrealist if I can’t read the objects at they are. I understand the idea your portraying and the poles do refine composition, yet they don’t really read as windmills.
Though I think the thought is finally starting to hone in on something interesting. I just wish the execution of certain items would be refined. I mean it’s one thing declaring it different and unique, but when I can’t read a key piece as what it is, then idk how different we are pushing.
As a student I know my work probably means little. Yet I have 3.5 years under my belt of studying and training under some great NYC artists. I’ve also been doing cg in general for almost 8 years now. 2 of them using zbrush.
That said Im giving you a fresh eye. The opinion of the piece that matters isn’t always your own as on of the key aspects of doing pieces such as this is for them to be seen by others.
Now back on point: your painting is super. But I think you over complicate your 3d images. You have a grand idea, but I think you are over executing it so that you make up for lack of 3d knowlege.
Putting in oil here or a splash there to cover up stuff Isnt what should be done. I’ve dreamt of dolphins, and in my dreams they look like dolphins. Even if they had a lions head and ***** for eyes, well then all aspect would look as such. It’s the real meeting the unreal, but the real component is what sells surrealistic art. Sure Dali can paint a rock face look like an arm, or a tiger stretching into nothing, but you bet that that tiger will look as real as it can be, and that rock face shadowed as if it were real.
Now I know your not going for that exactly, yet the principle remains, the audience must read some belivability, must see some “real” before it can be made “surreal”.
I’m pulling for you, I am. I think you are one of the few who use the software as a true fine art medium. And though I did just say all I said I wish there were five more just like you, with the willingness to experiment.
That’s all.