Any tips/advice/suggestions would be much appreciated.
Looks good. You have the sternomastoid muscles of the neck looking okay from the side but from the front they should attach to the inner clavicles around the pit of the neck like below. It’s okay though if this monster is supposed to have different anatomy than humans in regards to the neck. [attach=37038]nnn.jpg[/attach]
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Yes it looks much better the way you suggested. Thankyou for your advice, it really does help me.