Hey max,
I too am working on female model… see the thread here http://209.132.96.165/zbc/showthread.php?t=48165
some things ive improved on a lot since i got some feedback from the forums… so ill try my best to give ya some pointers.
First off, her face is very angular and pointed off. this makes it seem a lil manly.
your best bet is to take the smooth brush over the face gently in areas… remember that a ladies face is very smooth and delicate… i keep trying to tell myself when modeling… its very hard i know.
Also the forehead seems a lil big… maybe its just me but u may want to bring that down a bit. I think the lips are making it really stand out… u have them bended up in sort of smile pose… try to straighten em out and see what the effect does.
The eyes are a little far back in the socket… may want to bring em up just a bit… b/c right now ur brow (the area above the eyes, eyebrows) seems very protruded… smooth it down
the nose seems very pointed… remember a ladies nose is smooth and rounded… it also tends to point up near the end… rather then down. (well most of the time :lol: )
Anyways… i hope those suggestions help! maybe we will finish our models at the same time !