Hi guys. My name jafar dashti nejad . this is my sketchbook. I’ll send all my zbrush sculptures here . hope you like those. please give me some feedback about those to help me improve my works.
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Cool, interesting and unique work! Keep it up
this is my 4 hours sketch. an old man with expression.
I want to become more expert in facial sculpting and then go to full body and anatomical sculptes. Hope like it.
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PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK.
hi there. this is my alien sketch that I did last night about 3 hours. Hope you like it. please some feedback!
Looks a bit more like a robot than an alien to me, but I’d say this is the strongest work you’ve put out so far. It has that solid, clean look that I’m still struggling to accomplish. No real crits, the profile is a little shallow, but that could easily be a conscious aesthetic choice. If you want it to look more organic, however, you should probably incorporate the use of some alphas and/or sculpt in some asymmetrical details.
The alien looks nice, but I agree with Twitch about the profile. I did a quick sketchover for you.
-Dustin
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thank you both Twitchmonkey and dustinbrown for comments. Its help me alot . I’m going to work more on this alien for make it more organic and fix the profile. cheers
new update on the alien head. more organic and better defined profile.
took me about 2 hours for detail without alpha.
hi guys. this is some changes that I did on the alien . The eyes are painted in photoshop. hope like it.
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WOW!wonderful work Jafar) How did u handle with eyes? photoshop i mean 
and here is another sketch that I did about 2 month ago.
you see most of my posts are the heads. I’ll start to work on the body and post them here. Just try to become better on the head and then go further.
please give me some feedback on my works.
thanks TeckZ . Simply I use brush to paint one eye and the copy that for another. Very easy done.
Really great work you have going… you are really playing with different style here… people ask me why guys using ZBrush design some weird looking images, and my answer is always ’ cause we can with ZBrush"…
Looking forward to more of your work…
thank you Sigmund Hentze. I’m glad you like those. Just playing in zbrush until get ready for more professional works specially in human anatomy.
hey there. here is my last night sketch. took me about 2.5 hours. Waiting for comments. thanks!
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Looks pretty good. I’d like to see you spend a little more time developing the ears. Also, the trapezius looks too inflated.
hi there. Here is my last work that I did.I change my previous sculpt to make it curvy. hope like it. C&C like before are welcome.
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