Hi Thomas!
Thanks a lot for your feedback, I really appreciate it but your version is a lot better!
By the way I am the guy who asked you on youtube if you will polypaint the model and yes your English is perfect.
One thing I realised is that when I reach about 95% of the model I speed up the last 5% just to have something ready so fully agree that it needs a lot of refinement. This is probably a common trap for beginners like me who want to see the final product.
About the physics, I see what you mean, I need to use my imagination better and also view some tips online about physics - spend too much time on anatomy and speeding up workflows and forget to learn how to make models look believable
Keep up the good work I hope you do more work streaming!
Jackal