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yeah.real great one.i like it how you composed that image.
Brilliant work!
Great work!, I like the bullet indents that you included:D
This is a really really cool image.
How did you create the rest of it…the soldiers, debris, and wrekage etc?
As far as critique…for some reason the right pectoral muscle looks off to me.
It seems that with the position he is in, the right pec would be stretched flat and up more like the left one. Also the line that divides the abs seems too perfectly straight.
The legs and the torn jeans especially look awesome.
Great composition, colors, energy and atmosphere!
The greator pectoral (chest) is wrong and needs work. Grab a bodybuilding mag and look and the muscles and how they flow.
Also relax the abs. The ab muscles don’t flex like that. The abs flow too high into the chest. You forgot to ad a rib cage.
The Latissimus dorsi (back muscle) needs to flow into the arm.
The elbow is way off. Bring the Hulk’s left arm closer to the body. Right now the arm looks like it has a floating bone. It needs to be attached to the body.
The best way to model a pose is to find a image of someone in that pose.
Photoshop can hide only so much.
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Sorry to be brutal.
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rad66203___agree to some of the suggestions on the photoshop instructions,
shoulders, ribcage and the lover part of leg, the gap, unnecesary.
Thx.
I guess my next anatomy attempt can only be better.
No need to apolologize, Im posting it here cos I wanna inspire others, and, learn myself.
Not that I dont know anything, but sometimes, in the creation process, artist tend to go subjective on them selves, and not being able to se the whole picture.
So, the point is, I appreciate when someone else provides that whole for me.
nice work!!