Thanks my friend. Actually, wasn’t planning on texturing this character at all, however, i am quite curious of what she would look like. And thanks again Cal, i’ll post some more update soon.
Hi Glenn, just took some time to go through your entire sketchbook again: fun to see how you keep crankin’ stuff out, experimenting all over the place with sculpt/shape/texture:anatomy, etc. In short: a real sketchbook .
Nice updates, lookin’ forward to the next! !
Etcher, thanks my friend, I’ll post some new scupts/character update soon.
Nice works man! Good job on the purple girl
Thanks Captain.
Here’s an update of the texturing progress. As you can see there are still some fixing I need to do. I’ll post the final image when i’m done, enjoy.
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Looks great!
I would suggest that you reduce the dark stain texturing around the bicep and knee area. That is giving the skin a burnt look and conflicting with the natural randomness of the skin texture. The skin looks brilliant minus those big dark patches.
Cant wait to see the final!
damn your girl scetches are great
She’s insane,loved her loads but on second take her feet and hand size had alarmed me and Im thinking she might be of a duel gender .My attraction therefore becomes only on artistic merit… ha!Marvelous updates and love the outfit so far.I’d maybe lose the dark toenails and match them with the fingers as I cant see her using nail polish…but then again it looks like she uses make up…Looking forward to more from you,cal
khalavi, thanks my friend and for pointing that out, 2 eyes are alway better than one. I’ll work on that.
Thanks slocik, I’m glad you like it.
Hahahaha… Cal, she’s not dual gender bro :lol: I made her hands and feet slightly bigger cause i didn’t want her to feel to weak and at the same time maintaining a feminine quality. Btw, I’ll work one her nails, thanks for pointing that out.
Some great designs in here.
The latest render is good. Not sure what renderer your using. If your using sss check the scale control. Your shadows seem to be fading away. Leaving you with a water balloon effect and so your loosing the form of the model. Which is a pity cause she’s got some great shapes.
Also check her shoulder. The position looks like she’s shrugging. You may need to drop them a bit more. Also the arm pit looks very hard. Try soften her up a bit. Sorry for all the crits. Its a great piece so far :D.
brettSinclair, it’s good to see you here again my friend. And yes I’m using SSS skin shader(I’ll defenetlly fix the scaling/shoulders/arm pits, thanks for making that known to me). “Sorry for all the crits”… Don’t feel sorry about crits, I welcome it for anyone.
Here’s a 2k beauty pass of the skin/face. Still tweaking the texture for the best result. And thanks again for all of you crits my friends, it’s very helpful.
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I have to say I like the nipple plates. The eyebrows needs some work. They tend to go into different directions and aren’t very long hairs. http://www.pig-brain.com/tut01/tut01_11.htm There is some info on drawing eyebrows there. He’s my teacher right now btw.
Also I would push the striations of the mouth to be more prominent. They don’t stand out next to the skin pores. Does she have a specularity map?
Great looking close up mate,I agree on the eye brows and have just downloaded the pdf link from Womball(thanks).Shes quite a moist girl,love the forms more but would consider fading the skin spots to be more subtle now seen this close.Just my thoughts,love where shes going…cal
Thanks womball and Cal, I’ll keep that i mind. Actually did some HighRiz renders today, however i’m not please with the result just yet. I’ll pose the final image soon.
i on the other hand love the strong spots ;f But i feel some of the forms are too defined on the textureon the body, way to dark, i feel it will look funny with a stroinger light source.
I hope you don’t mind, I have a suggestion about the spots as well, maybe you could put a little bit of irregularity in the tone of the spots, I notice they are lighter in the shoulder area and darker in the chest and abdomen. I really want to suggest that you put some very very light yellows and greens and blues but as you have’nt changed the colour of the spots, I suspect that you want them all one colour.
The closeup looks nice, I like the spec. I look foward to seeing how that turns out if you put her in a water shot.
slocik, thanks i’ll work on that.
Point, I see your point :lol: . But seriously, i’ll try some different colors and a water shot sounds like a great idea, Ill give it a try. Thanks Point.
Point, I didn’t get a chance to try out the colors man.
Anyway, this is the final version of this character. It would have been nice to continue working on it, however, I am in the process of working on a certain project. So i hope you guys like it.