hi!
this is my last wip, critics are welcome 
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He has a wonderfully lop-sided, goofy look about him. Looks great fun! Hope that was the intention of the model … I’m ever so sorry if he was meant to be fearsome and evil.
My main crit would be his top set of teeth. How would they be attached to his top jaw if he was a real animal? They are set so far on the outer edge of the jaw that they’d break off if he tried to eat anything. And you’ve let the tooth enamel colouring run into his flesh and vice versa. The best way to avoid that is to get nice clean edges to the different body parts at the lowest resolution levels, then use Ctrl+Shift+click to hide / reveal one bit at a time as you paint colour on.
Still very nice work, though! 
thanks of the answer I will improve in these days the advanced jaw and the colors of the teeth. The teeth I have colors them today to you too much fastly
it’s better?
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render te4st in maya with displacement not good settings…
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render in mentalray with hdri
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light study.
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animation
VIDEO 500 Kb XVID
1 frame
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up shader
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mmmm
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++ lights
add noise to light and a lot of fog
render in maya , mental ray
what d u think?:qu:
Coooool movie
i can’t see it…maybe i need the xvid codec.