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confident woman

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#1

Ahoy …

Well the usual thing …deciding to make somthing other than a beast
Used the super average man as the base …thats right …hes never looked so sexy has he …:wink:

ive actually made a bae woman mesh out of it and would like to post it here if i am alowed for other users to use …bit sexist not having a super average woman now isnt it …lol

Anyhow …shes not really complete and theres a few rough edges here and there but i couldnt resist putting her up here …

I guess mostly for ideas as to how i could take her to the next level and give her that extra WOW factor …

All zbrush apart from the hair done in PS courtesy of the model brooke bourke :wink:

Bring on the crits then …i know they are coming :lol:

[attach=61390]woman.jpg[/attach]

And a progress shot
[[attach=61391]test2.jpg[/attach]](javascript:zb_insimg(‘61391’,‘test2.jpg’,1,0))

And the “Super average woman” :wink: that i modeled her with
Hopfully i can upload the ztool of her for you all

[[attach=61392]SuperAveragewoman.jpg[/attach]](javascript:zb_insimg(‘61392’,‘SuperAveragewoman.jpg’,1,0))

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woman.jpg

test2.jpg

SuperAveragewoman.jpg

#2

Cool looking image… The pose is interesting are the clothing articles separate subtools?

#3

Sweeet. You might wanna work on the lips though, nice pose!! :wink: :wink:

Keep ‘em comin’!

#4

Thanks for that …lips looking lots better now …

And yes the clothes articles are subtools…they took some time to get in the right position though

Would really love some comments on ideas as to where i could take this image
Its such a pleasure to work with her

#5

hello

sexie woman!

did you use the average man?
the whole week in my spare time i tryed and tryed 2 make a base mesh :stuck_out_tongue:
hope i get as far as this beauty.

greets Joep

#6

yes joep i used the average man …

i am willing to pass on the woman base to anyone providing i am allowed to

#7

ok a small update …

woman2.jpg

#8

that works well with the tatoo!
but i think you have overdone the white stuff a bit.
hopefully the c&c are welcome …

great concept, i like them confident :wink:

greets,

Joep

#9

yea totaly bring on the crits …i promise she wont be offended …

Personally i can see a lot of things to fix …her belly button for a start …and im not sure on the angle and lighting …and still trying to come up with a good idea for a scene or somthing …i just dont know.

Been trying various angles on the pose ect etc …

Its funny how you see things right after you post the image on here for the world to see …

#10

First of all, I like the materials and overall pose. The skin coloring is very nice. There’s still an attitude present about her. Nice background and love the tattoo.

Things to work on:

  1. See if you can make the eyes more grounded in the face. I don’t get the sense that they are round eyeballs sitting in a socket in the face overlapped with eyelids.
  2. The corners of the mouth usually are recessed slightly.
  3. I’d like to see more indication of structure overall. Like where her shoulders stop and her arm begins. Pay attention to the muscle structures to avoid sausage-like limbs.
  4. It’s hard to tell where her left arm bends. Even when partially bent, joints have creases to some degree or other indications of tendons/ muscles attaching to the bones on either side of it.
  5. She looks like she’s got the overall shape of a physically fit woman, but there’s no indication of it other than that. Like her abs. They don’t need to be ripped or anything, just more indication that there is something under the skin that the skin is wrapping around.
  6. Looks like the space between the figures where they are attached to the palm are too far apart. When you spread your own fingers apart the space between the figures makes a “V” shape. From your last pic, it looks like hers is rectangular.

What really helps me is a good medical illustration book on anatomy to help me visualize and understand what’s going on underneath.

Hope this helps!

#11

Nice lookin’ gal.

C&C: The jutting jaw is somewhat distracting from her potential beauty. It’s not the lips that bug me, it’s the fact that the lower lip protrudes more than the top.

#12

Thank you for those comments …really appreciate the time you took to post that …updates soon …

Need to spend some time with my REAL lady :wink: