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Banshee Creature

A little head, I did in the xsi video by Aaron Sims. Hope you like it.
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I dont want to go into detail intill I get the basic topology right, can anyone see any ovious mistakes I have made in his anatomy or just any things that I could improve on?

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First off, I like the design alot! Now as far as my crits go, I cant call them mistakes, but Ill tell you the parts that arent to my taste:

The top of the cheek under the eye comes to a sharp ridge. I think it would look better a little smoother (just a little).

The junction of the head and the top of the ears is a little strange. I would either cut more of a slice between the ears and head, or if you like the way they join, then I would bring the top of the ears closer to the head a bit.

I would pronounce the mandibular jaw bone and muscle a little more.

As far as the rest of it is concerned, I really dig it :slight_smile: I look forward to seeing this evolve.

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k, thanks. Correcting them now. Its funny how you cant see your own mistakes, I was oblivous to how sharp his bone under his eye was

I’m pretty sure that banshees are girls.

I know what you mean, Silhouette93. I get so wrapped up in certain aspects (of anything, really) that Im perfectly blind to others.

I havent really touched the model for some time now, but I had a go at adding some expression to her. Need crits (haven’t started on the neck down)

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Sorry for the poor renders, if any one wants the model just ask and I’ll host it

Its goin nicely! I think i can give u some pointers… on the profile view, i think the eyes need to be more to the front, closer to the nose. And maybe making the jaw bone a bit straighter… Good job so far!

Thanks for the nice comments, straightened up the jaw now and pushed his eyes a little forward

Small update, Im just really trying to get a certain tension in the mussles to make her really feel angry. Tips and crits are welcome.

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Test on adding details, soz if im boring you. I am only 13 need some help here please

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Nice work I just purchased the DVD but could share this material with us

Its just a nice material and lighting I downloaded from the antropus site and fiddled with them alot.

I hosted both of them anyway :slight_smile:

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