Mr.Proper! 
Nice piece, very expressive, really iāve liked. Keep it up
Alan Camara
One thing, Iām looking for eyes and also study eyes, at the momentā¦ and I think, thereās some little improvement to do on this head. You need to push the extremities of the eyes inside ( a little), and also reduce the end of the bloody, little part beside the Iris.
I think, thatās really a place (the eyes) where you can see, if the head is made with Z. I have seen a good pict that explain this very well. (made with max). Take a look.
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I really love the cleaness of your forms dude. I defiantely agree with peoples comments that say it looks like a hogarth figure. The shader really puts emphasis on your forms overall. Nice, youāve inspired me.
e.
Erklaerbar: Iām happy you like him. Still not sure where Iām gonna go with him yet.
El-D: Thanksā¦
Yeah, I probably will always tend towards exaggerated features as thatās where most of my influences lieā¦
Once I finish the main modeling, I might try and resculpt him towards a real person. Thank you for taking the time for a critiqueā¦
Marcus: thank you, some more fun is in storeā¦
Alan: I try to give him some expression, but not too much for my base. Iām going to play with expressions once I have him along a little fartherā¦
Smileman: Yeah, heās pretty much neo-classical sculpture, but I need the practiceā¦ The tear duct is indeed too long. Iām going to bring it closer to the iris tonight after work. I think the whole eye is slightly too wide. Iāll probably move the whole structure in slightly too. Thanks for the link! Iāll be reading that in detail later this evening when I get back to the model.
Pestopants: BINGO! Thatās what I like to hear when I make something. The fact you were inspired makes it all worth itā¦ We all learn and build from each others work and thatās what makes our work live on. Go forth and create, My Brotherā¦
Thank you all for your comments and crits. They are invaluable to me.
Dickie
Update: I added a phototexture using Zaaplink. I still have to finish the texture but itās mostly there. Still some holes that didnāt get patched, image-wise. And of course the bottom of the model which will be covered up by his jacket.
I also added the SS officerās cap. I did the base model of the cap in Lightwave and exported it to Z-Brush. I then tweaked the shape around and painted it. I then made the eagle and skull pins from a colored alpha. I drew them out, picked 'em up with the MRGBZ Grabber brush and made them into 3d using the alpha pallette. Fun stuff. The felt texture on the hat I made a while ago for my Frankenstein jacket.
Iām gonna do the officer jacket next and then finish up the paint texture on his face.
121 welcomeā¦
Dickie
oh, must say its really disgusting! which is a complimentā¦ I love the cold blue eyes, theyre sending a message so you dont need to read, its clear what youre looking at first glance.
E.
Only crit: The ear looks quite a bit alienish.
I just canāt stop looking at the hatā¦very nicely done indeed! Thats a really nice felt shader you have going there.
Wayneā¦
Congrats! Really cool model and great texturing job!
Ryan
Dickie friend !
great work with the last img! I love the eyes and the hat!
what did you use for rendering the last img?
see ya in the forum bro
With more blank skin he would look like 47ā¦
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The hat looks like 5stars small_orange_diamondsmall_orange_diamondsmall_orange_diamond
Cant get more realistic :]
Waitong for the final result, for now i dont like teh ears 
I was doodling about and came up with this. Beldar from the Coneheads. It was an old Saturday Night Live sketch with Dan Akroyd and Jane Curtain.
Made into a fun movie back in the late 80ās. This is Dan Akroydās character. I did him up in 2 hours or so from the previous head in this threadā¦
Iāll add more stuff later, once I get my Acer tablet computer setupā¦
Dickie
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My gloat sense is tingling!
āIāll add more stuff later, once I get my Acer tablet computer setupā¦ā
Happy tablet computing!
I love that scene where Mr. Conehead is at the dentistā¦ You should model that expressionā¦ Rows of teethā¦
Lemo
Sweet dickie!!!
āWe are from France!ā
Howās things at the Z? Or have you moved on?
-Sean Mills.
hi friend 
very nice as always ! nice to see your work everytime !
PS: I hope to hear from you soon 
resemblance to Dan, great!
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Lemonado: Iām waiting for the tablet PC with bated breath. I wanted it delivered today, but I think it will probably get here Monday. Oh well, good things come to those who wait, I guess. As for the dental pose for Beldar, I considered doing this pose, but I could only find 1 tiny thumbnail image of it. Maybe Iāll rent the DVD and screencap it.
OBZ: Yo, Yo, Bro! Iām happy you like the Beldar modelā¦ Yeah, Iām still at Zoic and I am still liking it there a lot. We miss you. Me and Graves were talking about you yesterday. I was telling him how well I liked that hot pink patent leather mini skirt with the matching platform go-go boots you wore that last day at Zoic. I thought the skirt went particularly well with your tattoos and beardā¦:lol:
When ya get back down here to the land of quakes and honeys, give me a call or PM me here, weāll take ya out to lunch. And by lunch I mean booze. You always looked particularly hot through an alcoholic fog. Kinda like a demented Penthouse model seen through a Vaseline smeared lensā¦
Drums: Heya Marco! Thanks for the nice wordsā¦ I WILL write you that letter Iāve been promisingā¦:lol: Iāve just been nuts with work latelyā¦
Arambarri: Heās still got a little ways to go, proportionally. Iām glad you saw the likeness thoughā¦
You always did know how to make me blush. Iāll get those picture of you, the midget, and horse developed soon, dont worry!
OBZ: Whoa, waitā¦Which pictures? The ones in the nursing home showers or the ones in the public restroom of that Burger King on Crenshaw? Well, nevermind which ones, just print both sets in triplicate. I need one for my mom, one for my reel, and one for the president of the National Horse Breeders Association. Man, is HE ever gonna be surprisedā¦:lol:
Dickie