hello everyone, just wondering what everyones thoughts are on this character. tried to optimize my poly count but im running out of time. created character in under 2 weeks for internship. any crits or thoughts? always appreciated
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heres some alpha hair. crits are always welcome…
the arm muscles look off to me 
Also the face topology looks a bit strange But i like your model ;]
Great work pulling out all those details in the clothing, I like the general style of his outfit. I don’t to much like the sleeve-less design though, but that’s completely your call. The anatomy on the face could be improved. Specificly the muscle that flows from just outside the nose down the face (I forget the name) should come closer to the corners of the mouth. Also, I’ve tried doing panels of hair like what you have but wasn’t happy with the results. The best I’ve seen was in Final Fantasy XII and they used one uniformed piece of geometry and just worked the hell out of the texture. It looks exceptional though.
thakns guys, good crits did not notice alot of them. ill change them the best i can:) i have a question concerning the technical side of normal mapping. i layed out my uvs after i scultpted it. now zbrush wont let me generate unless i use guv tiles which i heard is bad to use. so when i get back into maya the normal map looks like the uvs were auto mapped although in my texture editor there totally fine. i dont get it. suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
heres and update and you can see on the arm the problem im having.
tryin to finish up the texture here, any crits at all are cool. thank you
lookin good! the mouth is a bit off, but that kinda gives it a sean connery feel somehow. plus the arms are a bit wierd too. I look at the forearm area again. but the texturing looks like its comin along nicely
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