I am looking for some C&C here… tear it to pieces:D (Tried to make afro Samurai)… supplied refer too
this is a somewhat stylized character… so I want your thoughts on the anatomy I have created…
thank you for your time…
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your anatomy on the arm is wrong. there i said it. try looking at body builders or health books and look at real human muscles. That’s how i learned. Other than that your path looks good. I’m just wondering how your gonna do the hair.
i will try and fix the arm… I need too… before continuing…
is it in the shoulder area… elbow area or just all wrong…
in other words… redo…
I think he is talking about the forearm muscle, It looks good but at the same time it cuts really hard, it looks to connect right to the top of the arm and come around nice. But I think where your loosing it is on the back of the arm where the elbow is.
Also the lips look a bit odd you might want to do a close render so we can help critique that for you 
Great job so far!!
The two muscles that for the mass in question are the: extensor carpi radialus, and the brachio radialus.
They wrap around from under the tricep and terminate on the anterior side of the forearm and are connected to a long tendon.
In other words, the muscle that “bulges” on the top of the foream and cuts accross the other extensor muscles is way to wide. I would recommend a quick google of forearm anatomy, or check out an anatomy book to see what I mean.
Hope this helps.
_K
thank you … I going to fix the arm…
the Toy I am using for reference
is not that helpful… because the elbow is distorted
so I am going to have to find some photos like you say… so I am searching…I got some…
Can’t wait to start the hair…
i will get some closeups of the mouth…when I get the time