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African women help

Hi
I need new eyes for help me about this WIP please :wink:

I resumed this model but I have a few problem with the mouth, what do you think about the head? could help me please?

The model is a african women from the Namibia Desert,I like to make a illustration for improve my techniques with Zbrush
:stuck_out_tongue: [attach=163002]African_W_2.jpg[/attach]

Attachments

African_W_1.jpg

African_W_2.jpg

African_W_3.jpg

I fixed the lip and I changed the shape of the nose and added a few wrinkles about the eyes, but with a mouse it’s very hard :stuck_out_tongue: I’, waiting my Wacooom

African_W_4.jpg

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African_W_5.jpg

African_W_6.jpg

If you can do that with the mouse, without the Wacom, really, congratulations! :wink:

:rolleyes: Thank you but for the moment it’s a easy model without more details.
I made a good low poly in maya (realy it was for a European model) I changed the proportions and put in here and there a few details :smiley:

soon new images…

What do you think about the model??
if you don’t reply then it is bad…really?

I need to fix the nose?maybe it’s much depth…have the cheeks a good shape?and the chin??

please help me to improve this model… :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

I think its a pretty good model so far. My biggest comment is directed towards the first profile you posted. The face looks like it’s sticking too far out. As you see in this picture the human face in the front is much flatter:
headanatomyprofile.jpg

You are right Andwew for the chin. it s to hide really , thank you I m going to fix

maqroll

Hi do you use reference material? I think this is an Important step wenn you do
any modell even if it is a fantasy caracter. Look for fotos in the Internet to compare youreself with your modell. It is dificult to say what you should do
because this woman could look like your modell allready. If you put now details
like pores and wrinkels depending on the adge of this woman you are on the right way. I agree with andrew, but that she has the head so pushed to the front could also be an expression it looks like she is looking to something.
If you dont like the shape are feel that it is wrong then take the move tool make it quite big and move parts aof her head around. Stretch,pull and push around and look at reference until you have the shape that feels ok for you.
I think also that as soon as you wil have your wacom and get used to it, you will have a big improvement. I dont now if i would have come so far like you just with a mouse.
I hope this helps you for the next step.

Ok, i was in the internet and tiped ā€œnamibia womanā€ in google search.
Have a look there.

Yeah the jaw seems very long and straight