Xenomorph Balett [Nudity]

[Blackshore]

Hi guys!

There is some smoothing and additional merging left, etc. etc. but here is how for I have come so far.
It’s one of the models for my upcoming reel!
I have used insert brushes for the tail, and the pipes, spine etc. Cool future!

The plan of this model, was to make my own interpretation from HR Gigers Alien to a, feminine and elegant.
Something that is not in the movies!

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I’m quite new to anatomy studies, have focused about 3-4 months with isolated parts so far, think I need to do a couple of quickies every day.
Have realized that being a hand or face surgeon must be a very hard job, since there is so much tendons and muscles. :o

Anyway, I’m a student, please give me some constructive critique if possible!

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[jchave49]

Very interesting, two things I noticed are the elbow fold could use some fixing, and her straightened leg looks like she had no knee cap. Hope that helps!
Nice job!

[Santis]

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Ser bra ut, dock är anatomin lite off kring höft och bröstkorg. Kan inte göra en paint over just nu, men om du kollar på referenser så ser du tex hur höften inte har en form som går ned på mot skrevet sådär. Dock är det ju fantasi, så svårt att säga vad som är ett designval och vad som är missar
Keep up the good work!

[Icebox64]

Great idea! Really like this piece and would love to see her in more poses ^^

[Blackshore]

Very interesting, two things I noticed are the elbow fold could use some fixing, and her straightened leg looks like she had no knee cap. Hope that helps!
Nice job!

Yes, the elbow and forearm need to be fixed.
The leg part I do not understand, could you expand on that? Would be kind if you could.

Kul att hitta dig här
Ser bra ut, dock är anatomin lite off kring höft och bröstkorg. Kan inte göra en paint over just nu, men om du kollar på referenser så ser du tex hur höften inte har en form som går ned på mot skrevet sådär. Dock är det ju fantasi, så svårt att säga vad som är ett designval och vad som är missar
Keep up the good work!

Haha Santis! =P
Liten värld!
Allt jag gör är missar när jag är noob! =P
Höftfan ska ska jag kolla närmare på.
Problemet med anatomiböcker är att man inte riktigt kan se hur de vrider sig, ska ta en närmare titt där. Tack!

Great idea! Really like this piece and would love to see her in more poses ^^

I thought of doing some popart with her later on when I get time! =P

Thanks for the comment guys! will post her with some upgrades shortly.

[jchave49]

See so when the knee is extended you can see the knee cap, it has a bulg to it. In you yours I think if you added some volume to it it would help alot.

Hope that helps visualize what i mean!

[Blackshore]

The knee is fixed as suggested and the model was later exported to modo for render! Post in Photoshop.

[PalSan]

she’s very nice, but a material for your model interferes/hinders see her forms.