Hi there!
This is my first post but I review the forum since long time. Just want to say HELLO and show You my current WIP- demon that is tired of be an evil one. Hope You enjoy idea.
Ofcourse I am opened on criticism and advices
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Hi there!
This is my first post but I review the forum since long time. Just want to say HELLO and show You my current WIP- demon that is tired of be an evil one. Hope You enjoy idea.
Ofcourse I am opened on criticism and advices
Cheer!
small updateā¦
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Great style ! Keep the wip on !
Iāve been staring at this for a while now. I like it and I donāt like it at the same time.
I think you have found a look that can be uniquely yours. The elaborate āfilagreeā is a really nice touch, and the pulled spikes throughout compliment it nicely.
Unfortunately I think the underlying model is a little weak. His jaw connects way to high where his ear would be⦠giving him a very dopey look. The horns where your designs shine are themselves bland. I would try curving them or giving them some dynamic contours. They feel very Staticā¦
I checked out your blog, and it doesnt appear that you had this look in mind when you started it. That it is something that just came together when you were zbrushing it. I would redesign the base mesh with this look in mind. Or perfect the look on another head.
Iām really interested to see you take this to the next level.
i absolutly love it. personaly i love the ādoppyā look he has, the long, think jaw compliments him well i think. and the spikes are a great addition to him. my only crit i have would be on the final horns you have. they need to be more rugged i think. there over-all shape is good, but the disign is to āfrillyā for him.
keep up on the good work. id love to see a full body sculpt of him
the details on the face are really nice ⦠i like the detailin style ⦠his face features could look scarier, he looks kindda sad, overall great work, keep it up
Interesting model.
I like the amount of surface detail.
Now every picture tells a story as does your wip.
Your model has obviously a lot of horny like surface bumps.
The fact you have a pair of larger horns tells the viewer the creature will have been around for at least as long as the horns took to grow.
So my critique would suggest you follow on your present path.
Give the surfaces you are modeling the feeling of having aged related wear and tear.
Let these features carry the thought of incidents near and past your creature has experienced.
[color=palegreen]Keep up the work in process!
that reminds me of what giermo del torror would doā¦looks awsome, keep goinā¦
I like this head. Because in the sea of demon heads that is zbrush (letās face it) yours manages to stand apart. I think this is because the thin spikes, the detailing, and overall mood give it a sense of being delicate. Not to mention i personally love organic spiral shapes in general.
Youād almost say this is a demon female.
Anyway my only crit is the designs on the horns. They look great nearing the tip and the base, but in the middle it seems you kind of got lost. They donāt connect to anything and just float there, breaking the idea that they may have been formed by an organic growth process. In general they juse look like very much like āspace fillersā. I would try leaving that area without those details.
Overall though thatās my only crit. I can see where Brutikong is coming from with his comments. I am also usually critical of works that seem to focus more on the surface detail than the overall form. But in this instance the shape seems ok to me. Afterall whoās to say what a demonās skeletal structure āshouldā look like, so long as it seems to be plausible.
Thanx for critz
U_L. - Your opinion/feeling of that model are same as my programme when I started that one
I try to explain whole idea of that model later- translation of poem propably will take me a while Overall its about border between good and evil- thin and fluid borderā¦
Little update.
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Little update- overpainted color concept. Right horn is still early WIP but actually I do not have time to finish that piece. I have plan to render that demon in mental ray in max- wish me patience
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I donāt like how you went crazy with the snakehook brush one side. It doesnāt add much to the character, design wise. The non-spikey side has a good strong pose and really holds some excellent character. Details weāre done very well.
this model is simply amazing!!! itās a top row for me
Extremely well done, one of the best demons Iāve seen so far.
I like the insane amount of detail and the spiral marks. Looks very interesting.
Do you maybe have a video showing your workflow?
I find this character very inspiring and full of emotion⦠I get the impression of an elderly Maleficent who has removed her headress
Jesse Graffam- left part of a deamon is almost controversy- ones loved that other hate. But I have to agree with one thing- I went crazy with snake hook brush but I realized, that I could do it better- now We have little āchaosā.
zzagno- thx a lot
The Chesire Cat- unfortynetely I donāt, I had a few free ours so just started to sculpt and⦠here we are
Salmon God- my idea was to create demon that lost his faith in to a satan- He started to question authoritets and actually he hinking about all evil things that he had done in hell⦠sick, isnāt it?
I try to update something on a days.
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very nice detailing⦠but the form is quite primative and basic. consider dropping it down⦠and tweaking the overall shape I canāt wait to see where u go with it tho