Hi ive sculpted this model from basemesh (Cinema4D) i am going to make more poses and scenes
c&c welcome
[[attach=103208]SmokingGirl2.JPG[/attach]]
This is great! I like her expression
She seems floating over the table. you should work more on contacts between the model and the table
Maybe work with the composition or pose more. Her body is so tall and her legs appear so short. In part thats due to the fore shortening affect, but her legs and feet dont feel big enough to pull that off.
Skin texture atmosphere is very nice. Tone and color set a nice mood.
Oh my god, I love it! It has a very nice composition and style to it (and the boobs help too :rolleyes: )
But yeah, keep up the good work!
5 stars
Although the render quality is good, like a painting, there are some serious problems with the image. First, the composition. There are lot of empty spaces on the image. You made a general mistake with the composition, you forgot the use the rule of thirds. Divide your image vertically and horizontally to three segments, and place your objects of interest along the divider lines. Your composition will be lot better. The angle of view is bad also, it makes the character look unnatural. The pose is wrong also, the upper body doesn’t match to the lower body.
If I were you, I would create a background story for this image first, like there is the girl, a model to be painted. In the break of the session, she smokes. So, try to find a better composition, a better pose based upon YOUR background story, and it will be a great piece.
Cheers
Jester
thank you very much all
Im going to make a lots of poses this was just first try
there is Zbrush sculpt of this girl
[[attach=103234]divka2.jpg[/attach]]
It’s a really nice render, I like the colors a lot.
You should work out the way she sits on th table, all the meat around the butt area should be more flattened by the pressure, also her left hand could be helping the equilibrium 
another pose,i am trying to find good references (do you know good site?)
[[attach=103238]sigirl.jpg[/attach]]
that’s beautiful now. I would just make the head not be 100% aligned with the spine, just subtly tilted or looking slightly to one side.
Good job man!
studio render
[[attach=103251]Studiosmoke.jpg[/attach]]
Jester, thats what I should have said… thanks for backing up with that info.
Maybe some images at http://suicidegirls.com/ ?? (NSFW) Thats the only site I could think of that feels like your image.