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shark vs octopus

Hi @ all :wink:

here is my Final Seafight !!!
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dg_shark_vs_octopus_low.jpg

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I hope you like it :wink:

very good composition i like model viewing , position & sea’s surface but shark’s materials & its mouth color are not right these can be better.

how did get sea surface? is it plane modelling or photo:qu:

Modeling is good, but I think the positioning could be a bit more dramatic. The way it is now, the sea line and the shark almost form a “t” shape right in the middle which creates all that space on either side. The waterline moves my eye off the edges of the images. When that happens, the viewer doesn’t feel as connected to the image. Compositionally, you want to keep the viewer’s eyes moving around inside the image. It helps to keep the viewer’s attention.

Hi and thx @ all for the c&c :slight_smile:
here is my üpdate!!!
DG_Shark_vs_Octopus_low.jpg

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Nice! :+1: :+1: :+1:
That’s more like it! :smiley:

Great Stuff! like it a lot :smiley:

but i agree with kraken, think about the golden mean, der goldene schnitt:

[Goldener_Schnitt_Streckenteilung.jpg]

and maybe give the fighting creatures a little room towards the front too, the splashing from their thrashing (no pun intended) gives a nice reason for some more dramatic water movement around them… the material on the water is brilliant, by the way… give us a hint how you did that.

:+1:

keep it up!