A little failed work, I decided to give up revising this work and move on to the next one!
The name of this work is Ruri.
The main inspiration came from a Chinese poem.
詠螢詩 蕭綱
本將秋草並，今與夕風輕。
騰空類星隕，拂樹若生花。
屏疑神火照，簾似夜珠明。
逢君拾光彩，不吝此生輕。
This is a poem related to fireflies.
There is no text related to fireflies(螢) in the poem.
It’s very interesting, I put the same idea into my work.
I present the content of the poem in my work in my style.
I hope you will like it.
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I think it’s beautiful - most definitely not failed 
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