Working on an American Psycho sculpt. The side view looks very odd to me, think its his mouth. Would appreciate any and all suggestions on how to fix up the sculpt
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Working on an American Psycho sculpt. The side view looks very odd to me, think its his mouth. Would appreciate any and all suggestions on how to fix up the sculpt

It looks pretty good! I made a few quick alterations in PS that may point you in the right direction.
I think overall he’s a little less broadly muscular than you have there; still muscular, but more toned and swimmers-build. I reduced the muscles around his neck slightly. His mouth is also a little poutier I think as well. I altered his nose slightly too, made parts slightly wider and the angles slightly sharper. Lastly, I made his head overall ever so slightly less wide. Just a few thoughts, but I could be completely wrong.
Keep up the good work though!

rally nice good work
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Thanks a lot for the response guys.
Spellbot5000 I see what you mean about the swimmer’s build, but I don’t think his mouth it that pouty or nose that wide. I will definitely revise though. Thanks for that
Really appreciate that bart1000, thanks.
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