First time postings work on here, first time doing proper face sculpt too, and fully open to any crit, obviously still unfinished but think i’m nearly there.
O and its based on extremely wrinkly reference 
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You have a very nice job for a first timer.
Its hard to admit but your job now is better than the first thing i made when i was new to.Just practice more and you’ll get better.
Hi, you’ve got some nice detail work there, but watch out for a few things. First of all, I know you have done some work to make it asymmetrical but you want to be careful to mix it up especially with some of the major wrinkle locations. The area behind the eyes is already a bit exaggerated for how a wrinkle would really look there, so the obvious symmetry sort of makes that more glaring. Also, one overall thing to keep in mind is that you not forget the skull underneath. It’s good to try to push and pull slightly on the skin to create interesting folds and variation but you really want to be careful with it. I feel like you have a few lumps and divets that make it feel like there is no skull underneath. this isn’t a problem on the entire model but I find that it’s always good practice to constantly try to imagine the skull underneath the skin and make sure I don’t make the skin do anything that the skull wouldn’t allow. Nice job though on one of your first face sculpts. I’m not sure if you have done it before but it might be good practice to sculpt a skull from time to time to keep fresh on what’s going on underneath everything.
Best of luck to you.
Thanks for the comments, appreciated. 
TiMrozek - you wrote about there being few lumps and divets, you able to point out where in particular, dont seem to have the eye for it
edit - and just realised i checked out your gallery earlier, before you had commented, to help get some ideas from your old faces, gr8 models and gallery 
Oh yeah, sorry, should have done this before. Hope this is helpful. Still, take it all with a grain of salt, ultimately observation of your references is themost important thing and some people do have strange folds and wrinkles, these are just a few things that popped out at me.
And thanks for stopping by my gallery :). As you see, I’ve been doing some older faces lately too so that’s why this one caught my eye. Great start, especially for someone without much experience with this kinda model. Keep on truckin, hope this helps a bit.
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thanks alot for pointing that all out.
Ive got a particular picture that im using for reference and the man has ridiculous amount of wrinkles and bulges, so some are meant to be like the reference, but maybe not looking at my reference close enough!
i’ll def go over all those points, appreciate you taking the time.
Will post up some more images once ive made changes 
Edit-Just added hands, unsure of good method for doing top of fingers, not turning out too well.
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seeing as got no comments I assume the head sculpt is neither good nor bad?
so moved onto clothing, would appreciate any crit, thanks.
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