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monster

Hi guys:ç
This the first test for a chracter design I have to make.
There is a lot of place that I don´t like (eyes, and texture).
Please any suggestion will be very aprteciated.
Arturo alba-low.jpg

great work Arturo !

love the mouth, it rocks :sunglasses: :+1:
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hmm im not sure but i think that all technical aspects are fine but the concept isnt somehow. I cant put my finger on it, but somethings looks wrong to me…:confused:
Do you have a sketch to follow?

Thank you very much for the coment.
Here is a second step.
Erklaerbar, I haven´t any design, this is the design for a make up Fx that I will have to do. So it is a design itself. When I will be happy witrth it , I will made some other verions and a lot of photoshop changes.
I choose cgi to make the designs, it is more real and the producers use to be more receptive to them.
Please if you see something that don´t like I would love to hear it.
Thank you again.
hope you like it. monster2-low.jpg

Hmm, i think its something with the rear head and ears. But again, thats just my 2c. The second pic looks way better to me (one cant see rear head so well).
A pic says more than 1000 words, so i just attached one to explain what i mean :confused:

BTW great work on your homepage:+1:

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ZBrush Document.jpg

i loved it too!!
great!
Alex Oliver

You are right, look very interesting your changes!
I will try with the shape of the head.
Alex, hello man. Thank you for your coments.
Let us see more things from you

Arturo

now more like a child, now it more like the script.ç
it is for a nighmare scene so i´m a little bit free, but i like more that.

I have use the first mesh but making new eyes, marvellous be save most of the steps!!!
Arturo monster3-low.jpg

awesome model!! love it. are you using sub-surface shading on it at all?

He is real creepy!
Mostly teeths are growing out from a bone, so I think the teeths in the corners of his mouth are a bit unnatural. Sure they look creepy but they are useless there.

hey now that looks great, would love to see where you take it. And if course a shot of the final make up if possible.

Thanks for sharing!

Finally I choose for the human like face, and not so monster.
Hoppe yopu like it!!!
Arturo monster4-low.jpg

awsome !
really great work Arturo, the mouth is amazing !
wonderful

some color but I don´t feel happy.
Arturo color.jpg

00.jpg cool… looks a little bit like clive barkers rawhead rex

OK, if you think so!!
I hope that mine would be no so 80´s
Thank you,
Arturo

other color test.
Maybe too purpel.
I would like a milky white, and the translucency it dificult with so white on it.
Arturo alba-monstruo-low.jpg

love it :sunglasses: :+1:

amazing Arturo!!!
really bealtiful character!!

Alex OLiver

i think its looks pretty cool now. The overall look could be improved shaderwise, i dont think you need to change textures for that (In fact they work well IMHO).