Greetings!
Here is my latest sculpt; Gotrek from the Warhammer Fantasy universe.
I designed him from various offical concept arts, and I’ve been working on this more than a month.
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It’s looking great to me! What do you feel is a failure? The torso anatomy looks good, and the pose is very nice. Great job on the braids, too.
If I had one suggestion, it would be that the cloth on the pants below the knee should radiate out from the knees. That seems to be the last point of contact for the skin down there. Right now it seems to be compressing from contact with the feet, but it is barely touching it. I think that would help the cloth feel like it is being worn by this character rather than floating around it.
Just my 2 cent… happy sculpting! 
@midost Thanks for the tips ^^ I’ve took your advise and tried to fixed the pants.
Here’s the final version of it.
Hope you like it!
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Theres lots of plusses to this one, like the quality of the sculpting is quite good.
There seems to be a problem with the back of his head and the his lack of having an actual neck…But theres lots to commend you for for this really.
this looks pretty good man. my critique would be that the hands look a little off? The grip just looks too clean and so it seems like the weapon is just floating in the hand rather than him gripping it. also, i think maybe you could position the 2 larger beard portions to be asymmetrical cuz that sorta catches my eye. small stuff really…great work!
@rouncer Thanks for the comment! And yes, you’re pretty right about his neck.
@sarakawa Thanks man! It seems I still have problems adjusting the hand.
Sweet! He looks great textured.