hey everyone, I’m making a female game character for my portfolio and thought I’d post my humble beginnings here :3
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nice job so far
Hey, good start. I think you’ve got a decent sense of weight on her, and the proportions feel believable to me.
- the arms appear to be more muscle-bound than weighty to me, triceps especially, but also biceps and shoulders.
- hard to say for sure, but the neck seems like it needs some work… certainly the sternomasculoid muscles are pretty pronounced
- the rib cage, ribs, and abdominal muscles are more likely to be hidden beneath flesh with these proportions, I think. The ‘fold’ near the navel is pretty accurate, but above that muscle and bone forms would be softer.
thanks for the pointers! it’s awesome to be able to get feedback from such talented artists 
A small update… I’m currently in the process of retoping her and I’ve hit kind of a snag. What the heck should I do with the long dress? One layer of polys or two layers? This is my first time making a dress like this… any tips?
Btw, this is going to be a real time character, so she (and the dress ^^) will need to move…
from what i’ve learnt ideally clothing should be 2 poly’s thick
why is that? cause of backface cull?
very nice start 
though I’m not quite sure about the hands, maybe you should take another look at them, something feels off ^^
Also, take another look at the shape of the eyes, there’s so much more to it than it would seem Very nice work on the clothing btw!