Hi this is currently a head im working on for my demo reel. Could i please get crits so far? Im yet to tweak his design, right now he looks pretty generic monstery.
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nice facial muscle and skin folds-maybe nose a little more protrude out?-side
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I pulled the nose out a little more and changed the chin a bit. Does the ear look like its in the right place?
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The ear seems to be a little low on the head, at least for a human(top of ear is normally level with brow) , but if it’s supposed to be more of a monster it’s up to artistic choice.
Update - i moved the ear and tweaked it to look a bit more monsterish. Polypainted it at little.
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Shaping up 
Looking definitely better arter the modifications you made. Are you going to add more details (for example more wrinkles on it)?
The eyes should be wider from top to bottom if you’re trying to express rage. Most people think the eyes narrow but they don’t. They widen and then the brow lowers, giving the impression the eyes narrow. Pick up “The Artist’s Complete Guide To Facial Expression” by Gary Fagin. It explains what the face does in the 6 major expressions and gives examples of variations to these also. Believe me, making that change to the eye will really bring out the anger.
Maybe it’s a nearsighted angry monster 
I agreed that he suggested ：I like its muscle, does not like its foot, a little flutters. Forgives my speaking frankly
Changed the expression to a little more interesting one. More like a “ergh that hurts, but I’m a badass vampire thing so i don’t really care”
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Look’s like someone just crossed his mind.
score one point for Meskdavi2.
Negative one point for me not getting that straight away…or hours later.