a pleasure I’m sure I really like how it’s working on the chest!
the second model’s looking cool - I’d push the line of action more, you seem to be reserved a bit now… look at some golf players for refs [bend his back more, give it a nice curve]… the most important thing that breaks your pose now is the fact that the same hip and shoulder are lifted/lowered… it’s always the opposite curves - if your right shoulder’s going up, your right hip will counter balance and go down Keep it up!