Wow, great anatomy study! But isn’t the muscles between the shoulders and neck a bit too big for a model without exaggerated muscles? Also the lower back is very defined, he must have very low body fat(On the latest picture). But I guess it’s different what people see as exaggerated. Great work!
@ slosh
Well, i can’t tell because I started this project 1 year ago. But it takes much time for little adjustments on the proportions.
@ gaarder
Yes you are right, i will fix the neck and the back. Thank you
Changed the neck and shoulders
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Very nice work man!!! Love the sculpt…
Only crit i’d have is that the teres minor and major look a little over defined on the back… maybe a little more emphasis on the scapula might help too… but yea - great sculpt! keep it up!!!
Looks better now:) If I were you I’d lower the trapezius(is that the name?) even more, and straighten the neck a little, right now he’s got a bit of Ben Stiller neck. Not neccesarily a bad thing, but if this is supposed to be an average man and a starting point for other characters it might be better with a more ordinary neck. Keep up the good work!
@ chindian
Yes your right, I have to make them smaller.
@ Gaarder
It isn’t really supposed to be a starting point for other characters, its more an anatomy study, so I made it not 100% perfect, some imperfections make him more natural.
Nevertheless i used him today as starting point for a fun doodle.
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beautiful sculpting man…very nice…
i cant realy crit coz i myself m in the leaning position:p
I love this kind of modeling work…
The anatomy looks great…
Waiting to see more work of you…
Regards.
very nice lighting on the clay renders, sand the sculpts are equally nice! are you using a linear workflow?
I really love the render and the modeling is amazing too !!!
COngrats zipfelklatsche
very clean model. nice lighting~
Great sculpts and great renders. Thanks for sharing.
yeah! really impressive anatomy studys!!
Ok, I see:) That ‘doodle’ is looking great! Lots of character in it! And I’ve got to learn how to create realistic hands like that!