the hair needs more of a “wet hair” look to it, but so far this is turning out really good.
awesome man, few crits:
clavicle feels to pronounced/sharp
ribcage looks a little over sculpted
creases on the shoulder blade area possibly to extreme for the shoulder rotation.
her breasts are really rigid, biggest problem area I see is the shape, gravity doesn’t seem to be in effect. and the crease on the outer side has to go.
love the arms, everything from bellybutton down looks A++ the hip transition looks great!
Double post… DOH 
hey buddy!
really really nice work.
was starting to fear i wouldn’t get to see any more updates on this one.
back, hips and legs are really well done.
as for crits, i’d agree with what ben (right? 
), just mentioned. especially the ribcage and breasts.
keep up the good work, man. talk later.
-r
Thanks for the crits and comments everyone 
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womball: Thanks. The feet haven’t been sculpted yet. I would have left them out on the update but wanted to show the pose:P.
khalavi: thank you! Really appreciate it!
aesis412: hehe. Thanks 
mellowyeahlow: As soon as I get a chance I’ll post up a wireframe 
fabianloing: Hey dude thanks :o. Means a lot comin from you
skulll_monster: Thanks
SolidSnakexxx: You and me both hahaha.
neuroticgothguy: Working on the hair. Its a challenge everytime…haha.
bneall: Cheers to the crits dude. Exactly what i was after. I’ve not touched the breasts yet. Once I have her costume in I’ll have a look at them to see the influence of the costume. I’ll ease up on the back creases too. Unfortunately it all gets covered up now:p. Same goes for the ribs. DOH!
Rasmus: haha. Ye man its been hectic. trying to fit all this stuff in:P. The updates will be coming. In time. haha. Chat soon
5 stars… need to be on top row.
Glad to see some more of your work! Keep going bud!
Hey Brett, awesome model, her front really bugs me though. Check out this image of Jessica Alba, note also how hips end higher above the navel, compared to what you have. Also, in the side view the arc of the back seems a bit odd. There’s another photo that I marked to illustrate what I mean. (The drawn line there is outside of her contour, so you could see it for yourself)
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Thanks for the kind words guys.
mellowyeahlow: hehe. thanks i really appreciate it :D.
nickz: Hey bud. Thanks for the kind words. Hope your well? Must chat sometime…
Fess: Thanks for the great crit. The reference of the woman I used doesn’t have hips like alba. But I definitely see your point. I’ve already made the changes you’ve stated. Just haven’t had a chance to post them up yet:P. By the way your punk character is bad ass dude.
Some wires that were asked…
updates to come soon… I hope 
Keep going man,looking forward to the final one.
romilkchoprazb: Thanks dude.
Not sure this is worth a post. But here goes…
I’ve made the rib cage more subtle. Eased up the wrinkles and scapulars on the back and lifted the hips a bit more. Also I’ve pulled the back muscles out some more. Let me know what you think and crit away please. Thanks
This is a well done model. I guess you had something in mind when you made that pose, so I’ll just wait for the full scene!
nice, exactly what i was thinking.
could be the lighting, but the outer quad (lateralis?) feels a bit harsh.
I know the costume is going to cover her chest, but if the underlying form is right, the cloth covering it will feel more realistic. really solid stuff tho, this sculpt looks pretty much done, cant wait to see the costume included.
btw, nice job on the hands.
Great model, great muscles!!! the girl is hot!!!
Thanks guys.
Here’s a small update. Basically bringing in most of the armour and junk. A little test on what might be a look for the armour too. Let me know your thoughts please. I’m still sculpting hands and feet. And adding little details as I go over the pose. Fixing forms and so on.
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Please crit… 
Cheers
Brett
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-you crazy man…
this is without a doubt the best piece you’ve done, imo (well, maybe exept the portrait of your father).
no crits, just drooling… hehe
-r
Wow, it’s coming out great. Love the armuor!
If you are looking for a crit… hm, I think I would smooth a bit the definition on the arms, to make them a bit more feminine.
WOW! Can´t wait to see the final.
Cheers
This is great man, really nice pose and detail on the body and the armour is coming along real nice too.
Only thing that stood out to me initially was her abs (and maybe rib cage) seem to taper in a bit much towards the top but its nothing really.
Awsome work and can’t wait to see this finished man (love the cloth over her breasts too ^_^)