Hi there guys. I’m currently sculpting a Jin Kazama character. I’m focusing on anatomy. so id like to have some feedback.
Home you guys like the sculpt.
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Only thing I that looks off to me is his shoulders. Doesn’t look broad enough. And at the top where it meets with the colar bone I think it should be more flatten and not so reounded. I’ll include an iimage that will hopefully explain better. He has a nice lean look tho. Would love to see more.
Sankar82 - thanx for the crit.I will work on this and also include update as i continue.Please stay tuned for that.
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No problem man. Liking your start so far. Will keep checking.
My latest update from previous post.Please comment.
Hands update please leave comment not just pageviews.i appreciate it thanx
there is still something off with the shoulders to me. I think the distance from the top of the deltoids to the the armpits need to be wider.
I think you may need to lower the arms and widen the lats. Almost looks like he’s shrugging while pushing his shoulders back.
Its still at a very early stage, but I think the fingers need more work. Fix the padding on the tips. The pinky’s look fine, the ring’s look too fat, middle’s look ok, pointer looks too slim. Think the area where the distal phalanx and middle phalanx meets needs some attention.
I think you have a good idea of anatomy, so you’re off to a pretty good start. And I hope what I say make sense and can help you out with your work.
Thanx for the crit sankar.
I have modified my character a bit and followed your advice and i totally agree with you on the shoulders. it does look better now.
Here my update
I think they look a lot better now. Very cool. Just curious, is there any specific person you are using for reference? I think people like Bruce Lee or even Van Damme may help because of their lean body types. Finding images of them should not be a problem.
Sankar - Hey man i was actually using multiple reference images. i will include some reference images with my next Post.a
I will also keep in mind what you said about bruce lee and Van Damme.
Cool cool. I was just actually throwing out ideas off the top of my head. I’m sure what you’re using is fine since I’m liking the design already.
Just before i head off to bed heres my update for the evening.
As always please leave comments and crit.
Hey buddy. i like what i see. the anatomy is looking good. starting to look natural.
I am working on some new stuff… i would like to enlist your help. again very nice sculpt 
Havent been posting for a while now. was very busy with preparing class for students.
Anyways people here is my latest update.
Please crit…
GeranBronn: Hey bud thanx for the comment i appreciate it. talk to me on skype.
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Looking awesome! Would like to see the reference or the image that you basing you model on, there’s a lot of versions of Jin, easier for making comparisons.
Perhaps start working on the head?
This is my updated arms and hands
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If you already have a post with an icon in ZBC’s bottom row, please wait until that icon has dropped off before you post new images. Either that or edit your previous post and add the new images to that.
There are a limited number of icons at the top of the forum, so it’s unfair when one person uses more than one of them.
I’ve edited your previous post to remove its icon.
Thanks.
Its keeps getting better and better. I think the legs can be little longer. Forms are coming out nice, I think now you can focus on the head so you get the feel of the over all shape and what version of jin are you making?
just wanted to appolagise for using more than one thread ican in the bottom row will make sure i wont happen again.
Aurick - thanx for the heads up. ill keep that in mind. Did not know this.
RajbirD - thanx man ill make sure to keep you peeled. and make it look even beter.
Kelga - Most of the imsges im using is more of real human reference,My anicial plan is to end up with a well defined human base aswell as a cool likeness of Jin Kazama.Nut thanx for the heads up ill keep tha in mind aswell.
Thanx for all the comments.
coming along really nicely there man. really liking the forms in the arms, but i feel like the triceps might be a little off? your tri’s seems to end halfway down the upper arm, and i think they should insert into the elbow joint. but i could definitely be wrong here.
keep it up 