Screenshot in Unreal3.Hope to get everybody’s advice
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good work there! only thing I can comment is her eyes… looks a bit strange, she’s looking in two directions 
you should imagine a point in front of her and make her look that way. be it right in front of her, or to the left, or right. but not left and right
the rest is A1
I think the model looks excellent. The textures are well done too. Only thing I can recommend at this point would be to ad some reflectivity to the metal parts using a cube mask. UDK has a few that come with it so you don’t have to make your own.
Also, how did you get that SSS on her skin? Is that Transmission?
You have some great sculpts here, really! I also like the fact that you take the project all the way from a to z. Stars coming your way 
Pose+Weapon
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Nice!
Not a fan of the colors but beautiful sculpt! 
Great work
But she has some good child-bearing hips… 
a little bit too much i think, but just my 2 cents…
man, that could fit right into a squaresoft game. i love the colors. great texture work.
niiice 
Different color+Weapon Highploy
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I prefer the black version of Non-Non
Gotta agree the black version is more pleasing to the eye in terms of standing out and balance.Overall I love the artwork and artstyle very much good job,get some more updates posted man^^
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your models are great! my only suggestion for the new one of the man, is to make the eyes a tad bit smaller. he has an anime thing going on there with the eyes.