The work is coming along, and the pose is nice which is always going to help a lot.
I like the way you have her hips up one way and her shoulders the other, makes for a nice contraposto. However I think you could push this further because she doesn’t look like she is bearing any weight on her standing leg. Infact from the front it looks like she’s stationary, and from the side it looks like she’s walking, or about to take a step at least.
If you brought her stand leg inwards significantly (ie so her foot lines up with her groin) then that’s really gonna put some weight on it. Also then you’ll have a nice s curve running from her feet to her head. I’d also bring it forward a bit so that the back of her heel lines up closer to the back of her scapulas, that’s also gonna help with the weight thing.
I only mention these because you’ve clearly put some work into the pose, so it’s worth pushing it as far as you can.